Hi Maia, Sophie here from Awahono School. I like how you have a got a picture of a house on fire for the background. What exactly was your post supposed to be about? Its great that you made the person realise that the house is burning down otherwise there could have been further problems. You could have made a stop motion animation about why people shouldn't light fires in the summer or write a little blurb at the top so that people actually know what you are talking about and it will definitely catch my eye! Awesome work, Maia!
Hi Maia Amelia here from Awahono school. I like how you have put a picture of a house on fire. Next time you could put a blurb telling us about your work and what you had to do. I remember a couple years ago some fire people came and they had a maze that you had to crawl through as if the house was on fire. good job.
Hi Maia, Sophie here from Awahono School. I like how you have a got a picture of a house on fire for the background. What exactly was your post supposed to be about? Its great that you made the person realise that the house is burning down otherwise there could have been further problems. You could have made a stop motion animation about why people shouldn't light fires in the summer or write a little blurb at the top so that people actually know what you are talking about and it will definitely catch my eye! Awesome work, Maia!
ReplyDeleteIt was funny but I wish it was a slideshow.
ReplyDeleteHi Maia Amelia here from Awahono school. I like how you have put a picture of a house on fire. Next time you could put a blurb telling us about your work and what you had to do. I remember a couple years ago some fire people came and they had a maze that you had to crawl through as if the house was on fire. good job.
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